Thread:Love Robin/@comment-29809409-20170430005529

Hello! How are you doing? I'm a bit naive and I'd like to know if there are ways you can help me with this.

With that being said, is there any way you can tell me how I could improve this?

http://poohadventures.wikia.com/wiki/User%3ADN001/Shrek's_Adventures_of_The_Book_Thief

I'd like to have this receive a community approval, but I'm currently wondering what I need to do so. Could you enlighten me? Thanks.  