Thread:Yru17/@comment-26117181-20150502005306/@comment-3995235-20150506005744

It looks okay, but I'd rather just let Edmond let Patou freshen up by himself than letting Patou ask tell him to come with him because freshen up means wash yourself and I can't risk Edmond peeking into Patou's privacy in the bathroom. Here's how that part should go:

Patou: I gotta freshen up.

Edmond: Have fun, Patou!

Patou: Just let me know if you need anything.

Edmond: Yes, sir.